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Mesg #202 |
"38. Irrefutable by Dale Roberts" |
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RavenCorbie     |
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Member since Oct 17th 2005
7824 posts |
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Wed Apr-25-12 12:20 AM |
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Not bad, but it seemed a little rough, still. The lead up was great, but when it got to the big problem, I found that the resolution was too easy.
And NOW -- I'm finally up to date with reviews/comments on read books. For the moment, anyway.
(Oh, and I'm *really* liking the Weaverfields Heir). ~~~~~~Signature's Off~~~~~~
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 | Raven - 2012
[View all] , RavenCorbie, Wed Jan-18-12 08:07 AM
| | |  1.-3. Gemma Halliday,
RavenCorbie,
Jan 22nd 2012, #1
4. The Fire Within by Chris d'Lacey,
RavenCorbie,
Jan 22nd 2012, #2
5. How Blackbeard Helped Me Survive Middle School by A....,
RavenCorbie,
Jan 22nd 2012, #3
6. Noah Zark: Mammoth Trouble by D. Robert Pease,
RavenCorbie,
Feb 07th 2012, #4
7. A Clockwork Fairytale by Helen Scott Taylor,
RavenCorbie,
Feb 11th 2012, #5
8.-9. Frontier Magic by Patricia C. Wrede,
RavenCorbie,
Feb 11th 2012, #6
11. Lilah's Ghost by Deb Logan,
RavenCorbie,
Feb 11th 2012, #7
10,12,13. The Maze Runner trilogy by James Dashner,
RavenCorbie,
Feb 11th 2012, #8
14,15,16 Everlost Series by Neal Shusterman,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 24th 2012, #9
17. & 28. Barcode Tattoo books by Suzanne Weyn,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #10
18. & 19. Wong and Wong, and Eyster and Martin,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #11
20. Magic Can Be Murder by Vivian Van Velde,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #12
21-26 Read too fast . . .,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #13
27. Pretty Little Liars by Sara Shepard,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #14
29-31. The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #15
32. 11/22/63 by Stephen King,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #16
 RE: 32. 11/22/63 by Stephen King,
bpratt,
Jun 20th 2012, #32
33. and 37. Amelia Atwater-Rhodes,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #17
34. Auralia's Colors by Jeffrey Overstreet,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #18
35. The Way of Shadows by Brent Weeks,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #19
36. IT by Stephen King,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012, #20
38. Irrefutable by Dale Roberts,
RavenCorbie,
Apr 25th 2012 #21
39. The Weaverfields Heir by David Bridger,
RavenCorbie,
May 02nd 2012, #22
40. Tesania: Trannyth's Keep by Grant E. Brazell,
RavenCorbie,
May 02nd 2012, #23
41. Scones & Bones by Laura Childs,
RavenCorbie,
May 02nd 2012, #24
42. Dark Souls by Paula Morris,
RavenCorbie,
May 02nd 2012, #25
43. The Nightmarys by Dan Poblocky,
RavenCorbie,
May 03rd 2012, #26
44. How To Write a Short Story by John Vorwald and Etha...,
RavenCorbie,
May 18th 2012, #27
45. The War of the Flowers by Tad Williams,
RavenCorbie,
May 18th 2012, #28
46. The Grim Legacy by Polly Shulman,
RavenCorbie,
May 18th 2012, #29
47,49,50,51. Tomorrow Girls by Eva Gray,
RavenCorbie,
May 18th 2012, #30
48 & 52. Incarceron and Sapphique by Catherine Fisher,
RavenCorbie,
May 22nd 2012, #31
53. Ruined by Paula Morris,
RavenCorbie,
Aug 17th 2012, #33
54. Tansy Taylor: Paranormal PI by Kathy LaMee,
RavenCorbie,
Aug 17th 2012, #34
55-58, 60. Mindy Klasky,
RavenCorbie,
Aug 17th 2012, #35
59. Critique of Criminal Reason by Michael Gregorio,
RavenCorbie,
Aug 17th 2012, #36
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