Vision: A Resource for Writers
Holly Lisle's Vision
Your Characterís Parental Bond
By Shane P. Carr
2002, Shane P. Carr
bond between a parent and child in a fiction story can be exploited in
interesting ways. As many know, the bond between a mother and child is nearly
unbreakable. Just try to take a newborn puppy away from its mother -- chances
are youíll get a low guttural growl warning you away.
This protective nature isnít something reserved for lower animals: do
the same thing to a human and youíll find a similar primal response.
bond can be explored in various ways in writing. Think about the original Star
Wars trilogy. In the first movie we saw Lukeís aunt and uncle (surrogate
parents) die at the hands of the evil Empire. This led to a driving motivation
for Luke to take up arms and battle the empire. In The Empire Strikes Back,
Luke is told that Darth Vader is his real father. This makes for an interesting
plot twist. Since the person responsible for the death of Lukeís surrogate
parents turns out to be a real parent, Luke now has the inner conflict of
fighting his own father. In Return
of the Jedi we see, at the end of the movie, how the parental instinct of
Darth Vader takes over when the emperor nearly kills Luke. Evil couldnít
overcome the parental instinct to protect a child.
see the parental bond explored in many fantasy stories. In one such story, a
group of adventurers raided a dragonís lair for treasure. In the next chapter,
the dragon attacked the town, and the local militia gathered to slay the dragon.
When they confront the dragon at the climax of the story, they learned that the
group of adventurers had stolen one of the dragonís eggs when they looted the
lair. The dragon had traced the egg to the town and was now unleashing its
parental rage trying to flush out the adventurers and recover its egg. This
makes an interesting conflict as the reader tries to decide who is in the right:
the adventurers who unknowingly took the egg, or the dragon, who killed many
innocent folks while trying to save it. See how the parental bond can add some
interesting conflict to your story?
are some obvious examples of using the parental bond to add conflict. You can
utilize the bond in more subtle ways and still get an added depth to your story.
Let's say your story has a main character who wants to practice magic. Perhaps
his parents have had a strict religious upbringing and see magic as evil. You
now have a conflict between the parents and the main character. You can keep
this conflict as part of your characterís background or you can choose to
explore it. Perhaps one of the turning points in your plot could have your
character demonstrating to his parents how magic isnít evil. The scene could
have the character using magic to save the life of a younger sibling.
are countless ways to use the parental bond to flesh out the lives of your
characters, and many of the ways will become apparent as you work through your
characters' backgrounds. If you take the time to explore the various possible
conflicts that can be created in your particular story, you may find one that
will push your story to new heights and better bring your characters to life.
Exploiting the Parental Bond
Take a character from one of your stories. Think about his or her
background and parents. Use one of the parents to create a conflict with your
character. The conflict should expose the strength of the bond the character
shares with the parent.
Parent and character have opposing
viewpoints (e.g., war, politics, religious beliefs, education, etc.)
Character or parent make great sacrifice
for the other
Character finally gets long-sought
approval from parent
A scenario causes the bond between your
character and parent to collapse (consider secondary scenario that redeems the
Put the parental bond in conflict with
another character that shares a similar type of bond with your character (e.g.,
a love interest, mentor, etc.)
you are finished, examine what kind of depth the bond scenario has added to your
character. Perhaps you will find a situation that will help add to or expand
your current story or novel. At the very least, you should end up with a better
understanding of your character's motivations.