Writing 101: So You Want
to Write a Novel
Part 1: Planning a Novel
By Valerie Comer
Copyright © 2009 by Valerie Comer, All Rights Reserved
You've always wanted to
write a book.
Ever since you were in
school your friends, parents, and teachers have been impressed by your
way with words. You've made a few people laugh--and a few others cry.
It's obvious you have talent and everyone thinks you should write a
novel. Of course they'd read it! You'll be the next great thing, on the
shelf beside J. K. Rowling, Nicholas Sparks, Debbie Macomber, or whoever
is the current "great" in your chosen genre. You can see your name on
the cover now.
It can be rather
overwhelming trying to figure out exactly how one accomplishes
this task. In this four-part series So You Want to Write a Novel,
I'll give a basic overview of the writing process from spark to
The most common question
asked of many published authors is: Where do you get your ideas?
The most common answer is that ideas are everywhere.
Every story on the shelves
started with a single spark. What this entails is different for each
writer and likely each story. But there is always a glimmer of something
that makes you think you could write a story about that. Where do these
sparks come from?
You might get a spark from
an existing book. You might read a novel and think that if you were
writing a story like that, you'd do it a bit differently. You might
throw in a dragon or two, or the heroine should have a ninja background
to spice things up. If you're writing in the existing novel's world,
using existing character or place names and parameters, your work is
fan-fiction. It can be a lot of fun, but it is almost never saleable.
You're better off creating your own world and characters than borrowing
A spark might come from a TV
documentary, a song, a photograph or a dream. Some people use random
story generators to get basic ideas from. You might get a spark from
dialogue overheard at the mall or from a person you see strolling by. Or
the person might exist only in your mind but is doing something
intriguing. I've seen a young woman running through the woods, hiking up
her skirt, glancing over her shoulder with a fearful expression. I don't
know her story yet, but the running girl is definitely on my list of
ideas to play with.
Not every idea can stand on
its own. For me, the running girl is waiting for another idea to come
along and latch onto it. Sometimes it takes the collision of several
sparks to provide enough fuel for a story. These sparks will usually
include a character, an idea of the main problem facing him or her, and
a location, era, or world.
On the other hand, there are
writers who get explosions rather than sparks. The entire shape of the
story may burst into their minds in one Boom! and they're ready
WORLD & CHARACTER
Once you have an idea--or
the amalgamation of several--what do you do with them? This depends on
your comfort level.
Many folks write SOTP (seat
of the pants). They leap straight from that spark into the story. A
benefit cited by SOTP writers is that they aren't bored; they're
compelled to keep writing in order to find out what happens next. This
may work for you, but you should know the method is also responsible for
plenty of false starts, where the novel writing peters out for lack of
direction. Novels written by this method also tend to require a great
deal more revision than ones that are more methodically planned as the
writer seeks to discover which parts, exactly, are really driving the
story and which are superfluous. However, if this is the method that
works best for you, enjoy the ride. The rest of this article will likely
make your eyes glaze over.
At the other end of the
spectrum are folks with narrative OCD (obsessive compulsive disorder).
In this context, these writers feel the need to plan out every tiny
detail of their story in advance, including the entire history of their
characters and their world. OCD writers research or invent everything
that has a vague possibility of impacting their story. They can tell you
every character's shoe size. Needless to say, this extremity is
debilitating and often becomes an excuse for not starting to write the
Very few writers fall to
either extreme listed above, but are somewhere in between. It's a case
of trial and error to find out where on the spectrum you will work best.
My suggestion is to be as wary of under-planning as over-planning.
Here's a reasonable checklist of things you will probably want to have
in place before beginning to write:
1. Who is the main
may not need a lot of detail other than male/female, young/old, and
special characteristics that matter to the story.
2. What does s/he desire
has a goal. What does your character want to achieve in the course of
3. Why is this important to
them? If their
goal is to save the world, why does this particular person care enough
to put their neck on the line? What drives them?
4. Who or what stands in the
way of the MC getting what s/he wants?
There's no story if the MC (main character) wants something, then goes
and gets it without opposition.
5. Why is the antagonist
opposed to the MC?
Just as the MC needs reasons for what s/he does, so does the bad guy.
6. What general form will
their conflict take?
Are we talking about arguments, fist fights, exploding helicopters, or
7. How will it be resolved?
You don't necessarily need a detailed plan of the climactic scenes, but
a general landing pad is a good idea. You need a goal to write toward,
whether it's a happy ending with the MC achieving his/her goal or a
catastrophic ending where everyone dies.
8. When and where does this
story take place?
You need to know if your setting is in Seattle, 2009, the Wild West of
the 1880s, a planet orbiting some far-off sun, or a fantasy world you're
9. What genre is this?
Don't worry too much about the micro-genre at this time. Just knowing
whether you're writing contemporary suspense, historical romance, or
science fiction is all that matters until much later.
The level of detail in your
outline will likely match the level you're comfortable with in
worldbuilding. For the SOTP writer, you'll likely want to scrawl out
notes for a few scenes you think might show up sooner or later. If your
characters and genre lend themselves to sword fights, for instance, jot
a note reminding you to add one or more.
If you want a detailed
outline, go for it. An oft-recommended method uses one notecard per
scene. On the notecard you'll write a sentence describing what happens
in the projected scene (what is the conflict?), who the viewpoint
character is, and the setting.
As you write your ideas onto
notecards, think about whether this scene sounds like a beginning scene,
a middle scene, or a climactic scene. Then you can shuffle them around
to find the most logical order. You'll likely see that you need scenes
that fit in between some of these in order to progress smoothly.
How many do you need? It
depends on how long your scenes will be and how long you want the novel
to be. And, of course, some writers over-write their rough draft while
others write sparsely and require additional description, etc, in final
drafts. It's hard to make a good guess on your very first novel, but if
you have at least 30-50 scene ideas you should be somewhere in the
Once you've completed one
novel, you'll have a better idea of the methodology that works for you.
For the first one, you make a guess and go for it.
Upcoming articles in the
Writing 101: So You Want to Write a Novel series include: Writing a
Novel, Revising a Novel, and Submitting a Novel.