and Receiving Critiques:
An Exercise in Objectivity
By David Stone
2002, David Stone
One of the biggest problems I have with critiquing a
piece of fiction is my tendency to relax and enjoy the story. When I read, I
switch off my analytical mind and let the story Entertain. Only later Ė maybe
after Iíve read it a few times, or if discussing it with someone else Ė will
I start to pick up on faults and niggles within the structure. Until then I let
them slide and go with the flow of the story.
This is great for entertainment, but itís not good
when giving critiques. To provide a good critique, I need to be able to take a
step back from my normal level of reading. I need to disregard the fact that
itís a good story, that I like the characters, that I like the author. A
degree of coolness is required to maintain an objective mind.
In this article, Iíve endeavoured to pull together
some of the tricks Iíve come across to help keep my mind on how to analyse
fiction. At school we were always told to Ďread it, analyse it and write an
essay.í Books on writing also advise Ďread books and see what methods those
authors are using.í No one ever said how. This is what Iíve figured
out on that how.
The first step is to read the story as a story.
I sink into it and let it wash me along its route. This is important for two
reasons: first, it ensures I already know the story, where itís going, and
what its purpose is before I critique it; second, if it fails to pick me up and
sweep me along, then Iíve already discovered a basic failing.
I then re-read the story, but make a definite effort
to be cool and objective. I do this by changing the way I read. First, I sit at
a table with the manuscript, a note pad and a pen and pencil in front of me.
This is a signal to my mind that Iím actually working, not merely reading.
Second, I alter what Iím looking for. Instead of going with the flow of the
story, I observe how the flow goes: the logic that makes each step work with the
one before and the one ahead. I look at the characters as characters,
rather than people, and see whether they maintain their validity, what theyíre
doing, how they work the story around them. Another way of keeping my mind in
critique mode during this session is to be fairly brutal and make a deliberate
effort to find fault. I mark the manuscript with numbered asterisks in pencil
and write comments on the note pad. This way, if I later decide a comment is too
much of a nitpick, I havenít made the manuscript illegible with my scrawls.
After this, I re-read the story and look for spelling,
punctuation and grammar errors. I donít worry too much over this since Iím
not exactly a leading expert on that subject, and any obvious mistakes tend to
leap off the page while Iím reading. I do it as a final objective
read-through: sometimes, while looking for such errors, Iíll spot a logic hole
or character flaw that I didnít see before. Finally, I will re-read the story
as a story again, to remind myself that its ultimate purpose is entertainment.
While doing this, I will note good points Ė the parts that really work well.
They are just as valid in a critique, plus they help take the sting out of it!
This is a long process, but I find itís necessary to
give a fair critique. I can read a story, think itís brilliant and tell the
author so, but that wonít help. Gratifying though it is to know a reader liked
a story, an author really needs more feedback. By using this process, I find
Iím able to offer the writer more.
Although it is possible to thoroughly critique oneís
own work, most authors, myself included, prefer to get another personís
opinion. When doing so, however, the same clear-headed objectivity is needed. I
find that, after all the work thatís gone into writing it, a story feels very
much like a piece of my own flesh, still attached. Any attack on it will
Sadly, Iíve learned from experience that the best
critiques are the ones that do hurt, because they dig into the problem areas
that Iím too close to see. Some say a thick skin is needed to take a blunt
critique, but I say coolness of mind is needed. I need to be able to step back
from the beloved, perfectly sculpted flesh-of-my-flesh story and see it for the
pile of paper and ink that it is. I need to accept the fact that it is not, and
will never be, perfect and assume that it needs a good roasting to get it into
How to do this? One way that can work for me is to
play the game of Extremes. First, I read the critique through with the
assumption that the critic is a total waste of space. I find fault with every
comment. I scowl and curse and complain about the ineptitude of critics
everywhere and throw the critique down in disgust when Iíve finished reading.
It gets it all out of my system. Then I have a good laugh about it Ė it is
just game, after all.
After a break, or even next day, I re-read the
critique. This time I do so with a view to acknowledging the validity of every
comment. Every comment: I assume I am totally inept and the critic is
Godís gift to writing. The harder a comment is for me to accept, the more
valid that comment must be.
After that, the next time I pick up the critique,
itís generally easier to read it objectively and with a cool mind. Now I begin
to see where the truly valid points are, where I need to consider making
alterations, and where I disagree with the critic. This is important: it
doesnít do to re-write the story in the image of every criticís view. As
author, I need to maintain my own vision, but at the same time find the middle
ground. Above all, if the critic has misunderstood some vital piece of
information, I have to accept the probability that it is because I, as author,
failed to explain it sufficiently.
Remember that criticism needs to be honest. If someone
asks you to do a critique, work on the assumption that they want the truth. If
you ask someone to do a critique on your work, accept the fact that they will be
truthful. Maintaining an objective mind is vital for both processes. Without it,
it is too easy to only see the good points in a friendís manuscript, and
certainly itís too easy to be hurt or offended. Keep a clear head, step back
from the work and the process becomes a bit easier and a lot less painful. After
all, there are countless millions who will never even read your story Ė
rejoice in the ones who do.